TITROTU's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Veggeto vs Gotenks]

Needs improvement.

For a beginner flash, it was decent. Though there is room for improvement in a couple fields. First off, it'd be wise to add a preloader. NG offers them in their download section. It's basic, but it'll get the job done.

Besides the song playing in the background, there wasn't much in the sound department. Some punches, kicks, blasts, and charge noises would make this flash much more authentic. Also, you need to learn how to compress your sound. This flash easily could've been sized down to about 2MB. You'll wish you had that extra room when you start further developing your skills.

As for the actual animation, while a little jaggy at times, it was decent. The thing that annoyed me the most was the background moving out of place. But perhaps you intended to have that effect. After all, this is a DBZ flash.

All in all, while not spectacular, it was ok for your second animation. I would suggest brushing up on some online tutorials before submitting another, particularly on onion skinning. This will help your animations become much smoother.

permaximum1 responds:

ya i started to make this before i had anysounds and i will started on somw newone that will be better.

[Lucario an pikachu fihgt]

It's not your fault.

Because of Brawl, I got kicked out of college, ran into serious financial debt, lost my loving wife of 2 years, got addicted to pain killers, and have extreme suicidal thoughts on a regular basis.

But hey, things could be worst. Like I could be a no good lazy Wolf spammer. :D

RupeeClock responds:

Heh, brawl has changed a lot of things with it's hype alone.

[the beauty and the B]

Needs more shine and sparkle.

I just can't feel the mighty epicness of B without some shine and sparkle.

Emanhattan responds:

youre right. yes B does need more atention huh?

[Mr toilet paper]

Why are fat people so funny?

I don't know. They just give out a naturally funny vibe. You did good putting this little short together. Every time I watch it I can't help but let out a chuckle. There were a few things that could be improved, but hey, who has time to nitpick?

All in all, I liked it and can't wait to see what you come up with when you spend more than 4 hours on a project. :)

Emanhattan responds:

Lmao thanks boss ; D

[South Park: Dreidel Song]

Nice test animation, but....

There's so much more you could've done to improve the overall quality of the flash. For starters, don't use JPEG images. You should be able to draw out the characters. I mean, it's South Park; just a couple circles here and there. At the very least you could've just traced over the images. Overall, while the song itself is funny, the animation is in need of some work.

Don't give up though. Breeze through some online tutorials to brush up on your skills and be sure to practice hard everyday.

Toady1104 responds:

I just wanted to do by this way cause I think than the original images are better for this style, aniway, I'm better in actionscript than in drawing... But will try do that to see if is better.

PS: I don't speak english very well

[Foamy Got Blammed Collab]

Pretty immature if you ask me.

You guys seem like a very intelligent bunch. You’ve got great flash skills and some serious potential. However, you fail to realize that IWP has fans that enjoy his work. Not everybody has it like it, and to be frank, IWP could care less how much hate you shower upon him. I honestly feel that you guys are taking this situation a bit too far. Sure, the Foamy cartoons have been much better in the past, and yes, IWP hasn’t earned another portal award since last November, but that doesn’t mean you should rub it in his face like this. You may think that IWP’s movies are racist, but if you think about it, what aren’t these days? Racism is like Religion; it’s always funny unless it’s your specific group is being targeted. People really need to lighten up on the subject. This is the friggin’ internet. You know stuff like this will happen. While IWP may have lost some fans over the past few months, he’s still out there making a cartoon every other week and pleasing what fans he has left. It’s pretty sad to see you guys waste your flash talent and hatred like this. If you guys were civilized on a decent level, if would just ignore the actions that IWP does. It’s like you guys have to follow him where ever he goes and record every moment with a notepad. Oh, and mass voting zero on his flashes isn’t very cool either. His latest movie passed with a 3.33 and is currently a 2.66. It will probably continue to go down because people like you make it seem like bashing Foamy and IWP is cool.

Still, you guys did put some effort into this and I can’t punish you for that. That’s why I gave you a score of 8. I’m not going to be some dumbass who will vote and review zero because I don’t like something or it mocked something I like.

So go ahead and judge me if you will. My opinion will stand the same.

(Also, the ‘Play All’ button doesn’t work.)

UCFD responds:

Actually, we didn't put that much effort in it, the whole thing was made in less than a week. We're not bashing illwillpress for no reason, illwillpress being overrated by far is actually very harmful for NewGrounds, not only it 'steals' exposure from other submissions and brings in the wrong type of crowd (generally), but it abuses the system, do you really think illwillpress could care less about newgrounds? he just wants hits for his site and to get money, otherwise his actions were surely different. About racism, so what if this is the internet? That movie was not racist as a gimmick, it was truly racist, he made fun of an ethnical group and actually meant it, when I go on the bbs and say 'hey, mexicans are lazy' in witty way, I don't really mean that mexicans are all lazy, however he truly meant all the racist things his flash featured. There is a big red line right there.

Thanks for the reply.

Watch this:
http://newgrounds.com/portal/view/284110

[Your Horoscope for Today!]

Awesome.

Weird Al has always been one of my favorite musicians. What you've done here is take a great song and turn it into a flash masterpiece. I mean, it’s pretty hard to take a Weird Al song and turn it into a piece of crap. It’s just not possible. Although there are plenty of other people who have created a flash using the same song, (I did a quick search and found 5 or so) I think this one was by far the best. You definitely earned a 5 from me! ^_^

Keep up the excellent work.

ZekeySpaceyLizard responds:

wtf I made a cartoon TITROTU liked?
wwwwwtttttttttffffffffff??????

[Foamy, The Making of]

Heads up! IWP fan reviewing!

No, I'm not going to bash you in the least. I liked this parody. If I'm not mistaken, it was the first Clock movie to use lip-syncing. I thought that was pretty cool. However, I don't know if you knew, but this same exact idea was done before. Have you seen AEA2's IllWillPress Cartoon Tutorial? It's the same thing; telling how to make a cartoon like IWP in under 5 minutes. Even so, I thought yours was a little bit neater. Like you actually put in some effort into this unlike most of the parodies that have been showing up. I respect you greatly for stating your opinion in a very creative way, but I'm still a fan of IWP. Go ahead and call me a "foamhead" if you wish, I still enjoy his works. All in all, this was a pretty good parody which got me a few chuckles.

Best wishes, from who is quite possibly the only Foamy fan left on NG,
TITROTU

TremcladClock responds:

Well, yeah, you are a "foamy" head, which indicates a small level of idiocy, I still hate you though and always will, seeing as you're even more opinionated than me, remember the BarneyBunch? Ofcourse you do, I don't think I've ever seen so much scat-porn spam, and you call yourself a respectable member of Newgrounds?